What do you say about my second sig ??

It's only my second sig, so don't be so strict !!

 

nice but the render looks poor and the text is hard to make out.

Nice effort though keep going mate

 

Like Max said, the text is too hard to read and the effects on the cut aren't that good. You should only do something like that if you have another one that is normal. It's not bad for a second though, keep at it, reading tutorials and things too.

 

Can't even read the text and the cut looks dodgy and bad quality.. needs work bt getting there..