Battle Discussion Thread (R.I.P.)

So who do you guys think is doing better outta me and NTC. Hopefully I get my siggy

 

Wait till the 3 rounds are done, Umair. I'll say this though: you've definitely improved.

 

Thanks!

 

NTC really surprised me in a positive way. And Umair you have improved big time.

 

<div class="quote_poster">Chutney Wrote</div><div class="quote_post">Damn Iggy, you really are gunning for another battle. I'll face you after Wednesday, if you want.</div>

Aight. I'll make the thread after school. Any sig wearing bets? LOL
This is gonna be challenging.

 

Damn, me and Air Fresh really popularized this trend.

We're like Jay-Z and Nas.

 

That second post by Umair show's evolution. The concept of the crocodile hunter was impressive, if only you utilised it better.

 

I wanna rap battle too. I say we bust out another tourney.

 

Since I had so much material I wanted a battle tournamnet set up for Thankgiving, but it doesn't look like that will happen.

I say we announce it on Thanksgiving and start it around Christmas break. Then we have plenty of time to improve the tournament itself.

 

I like the idea of having one again on Winter Break. I never realized how much I enjoyed battling, until like a couple weeks after the end of the tournament.

 

How would we set it uo though in terms of who would battle who? Cause there are a few people on my hit list.

 

It'd have to be random. The ideal way would be to rank everyone, but there'll be new people and it's too much work.

 

Umair, your first two verses looked good but it seems like you just stopped rhyming in your last verse.

 

^ yeah I know, but you dont have to rhyme when flowing. Sometimes you dont have to, but newyas I thought it would be a good idea to like compare NBA with the battle. What do you think of it?

 

I liked comparing your finishing touches to McGrady's 13 in 35 but I felt it would have been better if it rhymed.

 

I changed the last line. check it

 

Hey Chutney is it okay if I battle Swish instead? LOL, we really left our battle in the consolation hanging and it looks like he wants to battle again. What do you say Swish?

And for the next tourney, I thought we were gonna have the whole division thing?

 

Go for it.

 

Just a suggestion Umair, your rhymes would improve a lot if you would adopt a rhyme style. Now they are really messy and its hard to see what rhymes with what.

If you don't understand what I mean just let me know and I'll explain different.

 

Umair, you're starting to show TONS of improvement. You're starting to use comparisons of basketball and other stuff and somehow relating it to the battle which is good. The only thing is, you have to make sure you're things rhyme. I actually like all you're ideas with the Kidd/Carter inbound and all that but just make sure you have rhymes to go along with them.