<div class="quote_poster">Quote:</div><div class="quote_post">11:10 was like Christmas, competition was on my wishlist</div> I liked how that line flowed...you had some lines in there...nothing really too direct but it was a cool verse.
Youknow the Yankees-Twins thing doesnt make sense, considering the Yanks are better than the Twins... <div class="quote_poster">Quote:</div><div class="quote_post"> and I'm unstoppable when I play ball I'll cross you up and make you fall</div> Best line ever. Who would of thought of that
<div class="quote_poster">Quoting P.A.P.:</div><div class="quote_post">Youknow the Yankees-Twins thing doesnt make sense, considering the Yanks are better than the Twins... Best line ever. Who would of thought of that </div> Only someone as great as me.
<div class="quote_poster">Quoting Ming637:</div><div class="quote_post">I resign from the competition.</div> You will be missed.... I guess.
<div class="quote_poster">Quoting Smitty:</div><div class="quote_post">Finally posted mine..go check it out. I'm kinda rusty too hahah.</div> Admit it kid you got a serious chill in your bones//Cuz you got done dirty like Jin did vs Serius Jones I got hookers? Man, you gotta be slow//My chicks are like grenades, pull it out and they ready to blow Fire!!! Azn_Iverson you better come back strong this about to go down like Cannabis a second round knockout.
<div class="quote_poster">Quoting vcwannabe15:</div><div class="quote_post">Check out my reply.</div> This was kinda of hot... <div class="quote_poster">Quote:</div><div class="quote_post">Like the Knicks you are always gonna lose the only thing you can afford are the new Starbury shoes </div> But then you ruined it with this... <div class="quote_poster">Quote:</div><div class="quote_post">there only 15 dollars, that how much you can get now you seem very upset</div>
Yo, vcwannabe, you gotta get some inspiration or something. Just get a pen and paper and take all the stuff that people say about you and how no one is taking you seriously and just prove everybody wrong. Look at this line: <div class="quote_poster">Quote:</div><div class="quote_post">and was that really your mom I saw at the zoo?</div> What is that supposed to mean? You gotta make sense.
Good job VC, I thought your rhymes were definetly better then your other ones. The ending was kinda bad but other then that, good job.