damn Junoon you need a music career no crap. you should ghost write for rappers make a ton of money. where do you live? i live in NYC and a lot of people would have a use for your raps - producers etc.
<div class="quote_poster">Quote:</div><div class="quote_post"> damn Junoon you need a music career no crap. you should ghost write for rappers make a ton of money. where do you live? i live in NYC and a lot of people would have a use for your raps - producers etc. </div> Haha, I've never thought about ghost writing...but I want nothin to do with music, I just like writing. I used to always rap for fun and write/record songs to express whatever I was feelin at the time, it used to be a hobby before, but after a while I got tired of it. But battling is much harder I think. I live in T.O (GTA) but honestly, as far as ghost writing goes, I've written for some of my friends but I found that annoying as well cause if you can't write your own ****, it's harder for me to respect you as an artist.
Replied to Junoon. I definitely wasn't planning on going that long for a first verse, but an idea popped into my head and I had to run with it. Anyways, it's too late and I need some sleep.
<div class="quote_poster">Quoting Chutney:</div><div class="quote_post">Replied to Junoon. I definitely wasn't planning on going that long for a first verse, but an idea popped into my head and I had to run with it. Anyways, it's too late and I need some sleep.</div> Wow... I'm speechless.
Edit: I cut one or two words out from one or two of the longer sentences...but honestly in terms of the flow, it depends on the perspective of the reader. When I wrote it, I rapped it to myself before I sumbitted it, and it flowed to me (although some parts were somewhat long, but I trimmed it down somewhat now). I'll try to come stronger next verse for sure don't worry.
I see what you mean about flow. That's why its hard to judge in keystyling. It also depends on how fast you rap some parts, so I guess its wrong for me to grill you on flow unless it really doesnt.
Came back VERY strong Junoon, that's more of what I expected from you. This is going to be a very good battle and the next couple of days will be very important.
Finally got back from airport, after picking up a relative. I'm going to try and fit in a verse before I go to sleep. Sorry about the odd timing. EDIT: Ok, I posted a reply.
<div class="quote_poster">Quote:</div><div class="quote_post"> Damn right I feel nauseous, because I just had to read your reply, And I’m out of Peptol Bismol: your 2nd verse depleted my supply, </div> I thought that was hot, had me laughin for a while. Crazy battle, how long is it going on for?
Junoon, that wasn't a vote man. I was just commenting him cause the line was hot. Freestyles should be creative and hot, humour is just a bonus. Lol i think I'm taking your freestyles to seriously. Hhah
^ nonono I know you weren't voting for him. I was flipping his line about stupid votes, cause the only one getting replies that the lines were making someone laugh was his.
<div class="quote_poster">Quoting Brian:</div><div class="quote_post">You guys good? Should we start voting or do you guys still want to continue? Its up to you</div> Let them go for the rest of the day. Tommorow we vote.