I could use some input on this work in progress

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  1. GMJ

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    [​IMG]

    This is where I'm at now. When all is said and done the "GMJ" won't be as big, it's just that I don't think this looks that great and was wondering if you guys had any advice.
     
  2. Chutney

    Chutney MON-STRAWRRR!!1!

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    I love the text, it's real original. Maybe there's a way to make it stand out a little more from the background (it seems to blend in since it has the same colour).
     
  3. pegs

    pegs My future wife.

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    Why is it so green?
     
  4. GMJ

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    That's just me trying to make the color more artsy. You don't think it looks good?
     
  5. pegs

    pegs My future wife.

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    I think it looks a little Boston-Celticsy
     
  6. bbwtrench

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    Not a fan of the color. You could blend it a bit more and text has to go... Kosmic text correct? Good for wallpapers, not for signatures IMO
     
  7. Young Guru

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    its oversharpened bro
     
  8. GMJ

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    hmm, yeah I see that in the text. Thanks for the input!
     
  9. M Two One

    M Two One Halló Veröld!

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    I'd say change the text. You've used it before and I've been using it for years now. Getting a bit boring to me. The graphics are bad ass though, good work, bro.
     
  10. Vintage

    Vintage Defeating Communism...

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    JMO: I like it... but I think it needs less green; more Nets blue.


    Edit: But it will forever pale in comparison to my avatar.

    :)
     
  11. Dumpy

    Dumpy Yi-ha!!

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    there's too much glare on his right arm and the surrounding area.
     
  12. GMJ

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    Thanks for the input guys. I ended up just scrapping everything and going with this one

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  13. Dumpy

    Dumpy Yi-ha!!

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    you're quite good at this. can you make one of my kids?
     
  14. GMJ

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    Sure. Just let me know what you're after.
     
  15. cpawfan

    cpawfan Monsters do exist

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    Make it so they are dunking on Vince and Boone
     
  16. Dumpy

    Dumpy Yi-ha!!

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    hm, I guess something completely over the top, but it will depend on the photos I can dig up.
     
  17. GMJ

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    Sure. Send me a PM when you're ready
     
  18. bbwtrench

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    This looks better. More color though!
     

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