I could use some input on this work in progress

This is where I'm at now. When all is said and done the "GMJ" won't be as big, it's just that I don't think this looks that great and was wondering if you guys had any advice.

 

I love the text, it's real original. Maybe there's a way to make it stand out a little more from the background (it seems to blend in since it has the same colour).

 

Why is it so green?

 

That's just me trying to make the color more artsy. You don't think it looks good?

 

I think it looks a little Boston-Celticsy

 

Not a fan of the color. You could blend it a bit more and text has to go... Kosmic text correct? Good for wallpapers, not for signatures IMO

 

its oversharpened bro

 

hmm, yeah I see that in the text. Thanks for the input!

 

I'd say change the text. You've used it before and I've been using it for years now. Getting a bit boring to me. The graphics are bad ass though, good work, bro.

 

JMO: I like it... but I think it needs less green; more Nets blue.


Edit: But it will forever pale in comparison to my avatar.

 

there's too much glare on his right arm and the surrounding area.

 

Thanks for the input guys. I ended up just scrapping everything and going with this one

 

you're quite good at this. can you make one of my kids?

 

Sure. Just let me know what you're after.

 

Make it so they are dunking on Vince and Boone

 

hm, I guess something completely over the top, but it will depend on the photos I can dig up.

 

Sure. Send me a PM when you're ready

 

This looks better. More color though!