Keep the core intact!

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  1. cmeese47

    cmeese47 Well-Known Member

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    Thank you for the edit, this is why proof read before posting is important. Since we are on the subject, your second sentence could be constructed better, I would suggest; "See me after remedial grammar class." Another option would be; "See me after class for remedial grammar."
     
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  2. riverman

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    This is why proof read? (insert "I") Way to stray off a thread topic!
     
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    cmeese47 Well-Known Member

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    Hey, you said this thread would not get many replies I am helping it grow.
     
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    I appreciate that cmeese, I really do, but I didn't start the thread. It's all good.
     

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