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  1. KingSpeed

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    You guys are awesome, thank you so much!
     
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    Yes, that's how it worked out organically. I think I have to stick to it now. I'm working on another five minutes!
     
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    If you do, I might recommend one joke per set where the punchline is split between two cards, and switching cards and finishing the line changes the joke significantly. Like:

    You're the comedian, I'm sure you could execute it better than I can describe.
     
    PtldPlatypus, Feb 13, 2018
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    Nah, that's not that different. He should do car related racist jokes. That's different.
     
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    He doesn't want to infringe on your territory though.
     
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    Not bad! I liked the material. You seemed more comfortable at the beginning than in the end (maybe you were running short on time there?). Try to lose the cards. Awesome job though!
     
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    I'll write them for him.
     
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    Oh I see the cards are intentional for character comedy. Well then, I like it! Just got to hone that character comedy.
     
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    That's a great idea. I'm going to do that!
     
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    That was great. I busted up laughing multiple times! I want to see more.
     
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    Thanks man. Once I get another 5 minutes, I will post.
     
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    Look out for casting for that Amazon show Marvelous Mrs. Maisel.

    I watch that and it would be cool to see you in something I like.
     
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